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Nice brother... The wordings is smooth sailing. Just waiting of how you do your conversation... The world might be interesting. I really like the how's the reincarnation work like 3 times... Will this story thrive in uniqueness or generic.. hehe

The story is quite good. Just need to edit some grammatical errors and make the sentence understandable.. well, you have some few mistake but you will naturally improve later on as you kept writing. Repeating is the mother of learning.

The story is quite refreshing. The Mc put well his love to his work, even I the one reading it feel it. A rare author, I would like to suggest, you should try romance or tragedy, I can't wait to see it.

The first chap is interesting and even in later chap. The is a genius, she had a great way of mind that was so magical, and he sprinkled it with magic to make you addicted to reading more! Truly splendid. Splendid. I am immersed, I want more chap!

The first chap is interesting and after and after. The author knew how to make the story interesting, she had a great way of thinking that was magical, she sprinkle it with magic to make you addicted to reading more! Truly splendid. Splendid.

I don't know what to say, the story is good and quite refreshing and the writing style flowed well. The story of mc didn't let me down, at the start, you will end up in love with the mc. I truly like the interaction of every character looks magical and really. Truly one of a kind novel that in 1,000, you can only find 1..

this is not an omniscient novel to explain useless things. if you read chapter 1, you can easily know how they go in chap 2 and this novel is super dark.