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Quasy

Quasy

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2022-02-10 加入Global
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1.2h

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3
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  • Quasy
    Quasy2 years ago
    回復 RainbowBeheader

    Romance will be slow and won't be the main focus of the story. As for harem, There will only be one love interest I personally don't enjoy harem stories so I have no interest in writing one.

  • Quasy
    Quasy2 years ago
    發表

    I'm already hooked! I am a huge sucker for anything myth/historical exploration related so I can't wait to see how this story continues. Another great thing is the large mix of characters that really help bring the world to life. Having multiple characters that can seamlessly bounce off each other makes the conversations very enjoyable. overall great novel, ill be adding it to my library and waiting for future chapters!

  • Quasy
    Quasy2 years ago
    發表

    Although the sentence structure could use a bit of work, This novel did a great job of getting me hooked right from the beginning. The mc has an interesting personality and combined with the quick pace of the story, the story was very captivating

  • Quasy
    Quasy2 years ago
    回復 DaoistQD6S5p

    Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review!

  • Quasy
    Quasy2 years ago
    回復 Coyle

    Thanks a lot for your review! it means a lot.

  • Quasy
    Quasy2 years ago
    回復 MrBtheNovelist

    thanks for leaving a review it helps a lot! In terms of the game system being simple, a lot of similar novels I've read feel the need to share the main leads system constantly almost in every chapter. Although I don't mind that, I wanted to take away the focus a little from constantly looking at stats and let the main focus of the story be Wyatts exploration of the world.

  • Quasy
    Quasy2 years ago
    回復 002_Yuki_Onna

    Character interactions are actually what i was most nervous about since I was afraid they wouldn't flow naturally :O hearing you enjoyed them helps a lot with my confidence so thanks a lot for taking the time to leave a review!

  • Quasy
    Quasy2 years ago
    回復 prajnya_shriyan

    Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review!

  • Quasy
    Quasy2 years ago
    發表

    So far this has been a very interesting read with an incredibly refreshing twist of martial arts stories by mixing it in with a more modern financial world. The fact that not everyone can be solved just by beating someone else up really helps ground the world and help lead the story in a compelling direction overall a great story with a lot of potential and I cant wait to read more in the future!

  • Quasy
    Quasy2 years ago
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    Truthfully this is far from my usual genre of choice but I decided to give it a review anyways! So far the author has done a good job of creating a strong contrast between the female and male leads. Having characters that aren't afraid to be rude or dumb at times also helps keep the story refreshing and adds a sense of lightheartedness to the overall story. I think this story has potential to grow into something very enjoyable as the author continues to improve their comfortability writing. For advice, I noticed that when I searched your novel you don't have any tags. Tags are perhaps the best way for people to find novels similar to ones they already enjoy so I highly recommend you add some. The second tip would be that in romance or non action stories, in general, a lot of the readers overall enjoyment comes from reading about the environment around the main lead. So I think if the author were to spend a little more time describing some of the little things in my detail it could help captivate readers even more. Im far from a romance story expert, but i hope my review helps a bit!