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aha? Well, we have our new PF novel climbing up the rank, let's try it shall we?*1 hour later*Okay. The writing style is actually quite good compared to what qidan has to offer. Author didn't have any extensive foreshadowing, 4th wall breaking or anything.Starts out pretty weakly, Mc is summoned, he gained a super op skill, his class was the lowest of them all so he was hated, make sense if you haven't read any published novel. And more importantly, its's premise is tell not show. Mc: Omg I'm so weak compared to everyone for now so I will hide my skill and I'm fine with being insulted and whatsoever (even though he just said a few chapters ago that he doesn't want to be regarded as average anymore )Also,MC: That jade beauty is out of my league so I'm not going to approach her. anyway she's a loner despite being strong and beautiful because of god knows why and she doesn't give a fuck into anyone so why not befriend her? surely she will befriend me unlike everyone else because I'm also a loner right?and the mc has inferiority complex (wimp for short). (also Author should think if what's happening is reasonable) Well, it's better than most of webnovels nowadays.
You mean Trier?
Bro got the death god as his headmaster 🥲💀
that's how humans are though? Don't tell me you like wearing rag and old clothes
Grade 2
Heresy 😡 how dare you!!!
Omg you are so genius! You must be Albert Einstein! Forgive me if I forgot something, genius! What a retard!
Uhmm. I'm an honest reviewer so I will hit hard on this one.The story is readable. the Protagonist is uhh....I don't know. He feels lacking. Lacking of personality, goals and motivation.The story development is kinda okay but the switch of multiple pov is quite annoying. It's a mistake most author made.The Protagonists needs to have a distinct trait from other story's protagonist to make him a bit more relatable, as to entertain the readers.Believe me, this novel have potential. Good work tho.