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looking forward to this can you let me know how frequent you'll be updating please
how do you manage to go almost an entire fucking volume with the mc it was so boring to me and I agree with almost all the point the op said
I stopped reading after chapter 135 after waiting fifty fucking chapters to see the mc not this stupid pompous fuck Edwin if I wanted read about a shit character like him in wouldve gone to some other generic fucking fantasy I thought this would be a really good story qt the start but guess what you fucked it u don't care about the god of darkness I dont care about fucking Edwin I read this story for the mc and somehow you wrote this story more about the side character then the mc its fucking ridiculous I dont mind the occasional different povs but when it goes fuck 55 fucking straight chapter im done it was probably more honestly I just stopped reading after realising the god of darkness wasn't the mc I mean I suspected but I wasn't sure because 4 chapters I actually seen of him you dragged out actually telling us who he is fuck off your a shit writer
author can you please update a bit faster if you can?
its a webnovel thing u can turn on when writing a novel where it will automatically put comma every certain amount of time
author in the most recent chapter is victors picture in his character description his main body now like is it the form he uses even when relaxing and stuff
also it makes zero sense what so ever that none of the pillars died they went against the former pillars demon version even stronger then when they were demon slayer yet they were killed by a bunch of half asked kids its ridiculous
l liked it at the start but the ending was shit also it would've been better if this was a tanjiroxmuzan based fanfic fuck I hate that stupid power of friendship shit would've been so much better if he stayed the demon king
read my three vampire wives hes restricted by morals at the start but quickly loses them