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Author, this shit is peak and it can become even more peak if the romance is sorted out. I actually don't dislike Zoey and want to see some character development of her. And for those saying that Zoey is immature, like cmon guys she fucking 17. I don't remember being mature 2 years back when I was 17, so let's wait and let the author do his work.

Author it better be kiera otherwise

I am sorry boy but the gods are dead.

I woul hate them too if this happened, no matter the logic.

I want to stack so bad but the TEMPTATION AHHHH! !

If only you knew the existence of THE MIGHTY SYSTEM.

F

Your words were so true😁

we toppling planets with the B- charm.

I don't have a shred of doubt about this novel becoming one of the best in coming times. The only advice I will give you is that to not rush it like the end of "The Author's POV". Back to the review: This review is being written as of chapter 50, I will make a new one when it have more chapter in future. -Our main character is a likeable one, especially his wicked sense of humor and his taste in food. -Side character are fleshed out as well, each having their own unique personality. -The world building is not done yet so we only know two-three places but with how good the intro to them was I am sure it will be amazing. -The plot development has started in recent chapters only as the earlier one were intro to the story. -The pacing is good enough not too fast, not too slow. -The power system is being explained as the story is developing and I am liking it very much, as this Indicates that there won't be much info dumps (Author definitely learned from his mistakes when he started TAPOV). All in all it's an amazing novel which will on the trending list in no time. The only think I ask you is to give is more chapters, two chapters a day aren't enough make them at least 10 a day.