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More!

YESSS!!!!!

HOTD/ Asoiaf if you want to add the ninja spin/ chakra. It will interesting to see how buildings and kingdom buildings that take years be completed faster. It can also start beyond the wall or in the north.

I had a thought. What happens if a similar concept of the creative minecraft is put into beyond the wall. The story doesn’t necessarily need to empower the night king to make it interesting. Technically the dead can be easily defeated and the story can focus on reaction and kingdom building.

My best advice is that you ignore them. The less you react they will lose interest and leave. Let the story simmer. It would grab the right people in time. Also is there a mass upload for a certain milestone?

Does he have his memories now ? Will he spend the money to make a safe base?

This format is fine tbh. Keep going

I like this story and I hope you make sure that the dialogue isn’t stock in one conversation. Make sure things are happening and he is achieving tasks that will build the north. Also I hope he can save ned and Arya and Sansa so he can retreat to the north and claim independence. He can help build roads connecting to other territories and he can spawn skilled villagers to go to other towns to ensure progress. Plus it would be appealing if the way he talked felt human and not weird. Also try to give him character development so he won’t always look down on people if they are backwards. He sounds slightly narcissistic if he is talking down on them without showing how. Love it and keep going!

The story has huge potential. More chapters please.

I got an advice for you If you want to add on this fanfic. When the show ends on their live screen I recommend that you send them back to their world and afterwards the livestream screen shows to the whole world the show of house of the dragon or a knight of the seven kingdoms to give an extension to the story and if there is answer rewards they can be on rewards benefiting the kingdom rather than individual.