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  • Ba_La
    Ba_La3 years ago
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    Enjoyed the novel so far. Will the entity of pride help in managing the harem as I believe in order to manage a harem you need to be a bit on the dominant side or else the whole harem will walk over you and you will become a simp(most Japanese isekais). Will there be devil fruits ? If there is, will it have gomu gomu no mi with mc not knowing it is hito hito no mi model Nika. Just a silly thought

  • Ba_La
    Ba_La3 years ago
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    Artermis or Haruhime as it helps building MC character and his own views. Thought about hestia but little hesitant it first may cause it to be weird with loki, hephaestus or other gods and their families mostly Freya. So building with a mortal or the fox girl or having a good partner such as artermis and her family may be good start.

  • Ba_La
    Ba_La3 years ago
    回復 kurit_kun

    It is just the spider sense works against lala(chapter 34) but it is not a big deal as it is not exactly a plot hole.

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    Ba_La3 years ago
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    There is a little plot hole with spider sense in the previous chapter but I believe it senses the surroundings of incoming danger so it includes friendly fire but in mcu it was little different. And there is also a chapter where lala tried to shoot him with the gum gun, his sister tried to punch him but it failed so not that option. But the Karen acting weird may have broken him. And also the kenboushoukou haki also has awareness over limits as in one-piece. So it may be better to convert or take that into account in future chapters, or adding the device that block spider senses to create comedy gigs.

  • Ba_La
    Ba_La3 years ago
    回復 Ba_La

    Yep

  • Ba_La
    Ba_La3 years ago
    回復 Alyan

    I think you have seen some shi##y novels(pokemon like fmc or mc to be exact) try some of this novels (/legend of ling tian/ like novels where fmc is developed over time and actually have some character) and this fanfiction has been a good memorable and wonderful journey so far so give it a try.

  • Ba_La
    Ba_La3 years ago
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    No beta mc=> check No cruel psycho Mc => check No collectable but sensible harem => check No cringes=> check MC with brains and brains =>check Unique=> check What more do you need for now.

  • Ba_La
    Ba_La3 years ago
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    😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭🤩❤❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😍❤❤😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤❤❤😍😍 😍😍❤😍😍❤😍❤😍❤😍😍❤😍❤❤😍😍❤😍😍😍😍😍 😍😍❤😍😍❤❤❤😍❤❤❤❤😍❤😍😍😍❤❤❤❤😍😍 😍😍❤😍😍❤😍❤😍❤😍😍❤😍❤❤😍😍😍😍😍❤😍😍 😍😍❤😍😍❤😍❤😍❤😍😍❤😍❤😍❤😍❤❤❤❤😍😍 😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇 Characters could use a bit of individuality like the clothes they wear, the design of the places they visit. Other than that everything just is awesome. Thank you for the story. 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭🤩❤❤❤😍❤😍❤😍😍❤❤😍😍❤😍❤😍❤❤❤❤😍😍 😍😍❤😍😍❤😍❤😍❤😍😍❤😍❤❤😍😍❤😍😍😍😍😍 😍😍❤😍😍❤❤❤😍❤❤❤❤😍❤😍😍😍❤❤❤❤😍😍 😍😍❤😍😍❤😍❤😍❤😍😍❤😍❤❤😍😍😍😍😍❤😍😍 😍😍❤😍😍❤😍❤😍❤😍😍❤😍❤😍❤😍❤❤❤❤😍😍 😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇