Twasasetup

Good in the beginning, I actually got hooked on it but it turned out to be brain dead AI nonsense afterwards. Seems like AU at this point with how complicated the characters are yet the dialogue is so predictably AI. Mc seems to know everything about everything yet we the readers don’t know why the mc knows everything about everything. Cersie Lannister is some complicated character even harder to understand than the mc himself. Honestly, if you can turn off your brain, you can certainly enjoy this fic. However, it is not for me.

Yujiro with chakra would end this fic in a minute bro. Stop overestimating Garou and underestimating Yujiro.

Author, none of your stories are complete. You start a story and then hop on to the next one. Are you lacking confidence, concentration, or likes and comments? stop being such a douche!

Ai trash. The conversations are so cringe to read. No one talks like that. Npc be like “why are you here” Mc : I’m here to eat shit and die Npc: thats the first truthful thing you’ve said since we met 2 seconds ago

Why would you assume I went straight to chapter 44?!? I read the entire available chapters before posting a review. Why don’t you just say “read 1000 chapters before leaving a review”

Passive MC, going along with the story just for the sake of it. Nothing really changes whether he is in the story or not. I kept reading only in hopes of seeing changes to the original story but honestly I am disappointed and perplexed how this fic reached so high in ranking even after being so mediocre.

In the recent chapters, it feels like the author's sperm took over his brain cells. MC is too fkn horney and doesn't have the bearings of a supreme being. I bet the mc's gonna end up fkng anything that moves in the future before this fic dies a cringe death.