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Nowhere, the author just can't take constructive criticism

Still feels like trash tbh. It's just a base for everyone to underestimate the MC so you get to set up cliche situations and drama. Its an overused cliche.

Let me start off by saying this: this is a surprisingly good book considering webnovel romance standard. It's 100% worth it to read it. There is just one thing that's super annoying, and that's why I've rated story development at 2/5. It's the goddamn side characters. I know it's supposed to be a slow, healing book, but damn me I'm at chapter 270 and 80% of the book is the history of side characters. It's annoying as hell and completely imbalanced. On top of that, the character that gets the most screen time is the FL best friend Hyson, who frankly is rather annoying. I feel like I'm forced to read about him, even though I really don't care about him or his history. I really enjoy the premise of FL having a best friend who is male and all, but he gets WAY too much screen time.

foreshadowing?

ikr? it's common to still go to work with a fever like that

Childish, naive and average. There is literally no background to anything. No information about the world or how it came to the state it is now. No information about any sort of past of our MC. The MC himself is naive and beta. Alien race (elves) attacks earth, kills millions of ppl, kills his comrades in arms in a prolonged war, and he decides to trust and help the aliens, because of a woman he met twice and barely even spoke to. The entire idea that a random lieutenant can agree to an invitation to peace talks from enemies, without reporting anything or orders from high command is a joke. There is no immersion, and all the characters, MC included, are 2D (not only do we have no background, the entire plot is rushed and fast paced, we have no idea about MCs feelings or inner thoughts). The plot itself, at least until what I've read (30 chapters) was cliche.

Yep, super cringe. Way against the human nature. Also, just the idea of a lieutenant agreeing to go with the elves without reporting or getting agreement from the high command is stupid. The book makes no sense.

The tittle reveals too much about the chapter. Even the system said mysterious reward or something, but we got the answer right from the start

Dude legit decided for himself he wants to be a ginger, lol

Sounds good but it will be hard to find it by your description lol