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Why does every cultivation story go gay

Hows he a prince

I like when the mc isn’t ruthless like how he was in the beginning of the book but now he seems to start killing people and becoming annoyingly arrogant

Seems kinda strange how Rota is all of a sudden super strong. I hope thorn still remains much stronger. Could you add more characters to the group

I think the monsters need to be higher levels the charming smile is becoming to easy and useful

I think Arad is too passive in his goal of trying to sleep with Aella

Arads mother is getting lretty annoying. It seems like she is purposely getting in the way of the relationship between Arad and Aemilla

The mc is too arrogant. Tagts teh rrason eevryone hates him. he should learn to back off

I wish I pculd find a novel about a peace loving mc who actually tries to stay peaceful and not be a hero

I wonder what the guy will think if he ever finds out that she killed kids? This is definitely a darker tone story but it has good potential. How many Yandere girls are you planning to add?