BloodMonk

HP will be good

And author r u ok you are like pumping chapters like there is no tomorrow.... I like it but you also need to get rest.... 1or2 chapters a day is good

Hmm

I like it but is it necessary for the other 6 to be alive? I thought there will be no plot armour for them... And will there be a Multiverse travel to go to other world.?

This novel?

Yeah I also agree in irl if you have big backer then problem will be swiftly dealt but author has tendency of drama. When kazir mother was introduced I was like kill her she is a snake that would bite you even if you are not in the way... I was like KILL the mother and get rid of kazir 50% problem but no she is not dead yet forget about dying she is not even getting any accident... Sometimes this fic is good but when the mom part comes up ohh man I am like KILL her already.

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I love the analogy of Sun Wukong. Author, I think your writing style is great, but this chapter contains some sentences that are different, yet they convey the same dialogue when read. If you solve this problem then your fic would be on the level of one of the book i love -- JJK Nah I'd Adapt from Jaxwolf

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