Fat_Kahuna

Nah it was really good, brings more depth to the characters and shows their mindsets through the series, keep it up 😁

Author has taken amazing liberties with the Ben 10 universe and the marvel one, most of the time the main character follows the MCU script with slight changes in the battles or villains but this one seems to be a good attempt to throw away the original script and make something new. It’s great to see the Ben 10 aliens and the interactions he has with the heroes and villains of marvel but at the same time not forgetting to incorporate the amazing fun that is Ben 10. Only slight gripe I have is the lack of veriety in what aliens are used in battles for the first 30ish chapters it’s mainly the same 3. Otherwise this is a fun read and I highly encourage people to read this, looking forward to what’s next author and keep up the amazing work!

+1

Galbatorix literally states in the books his cloak is made from the wings of the largest wild dragon, that he slayed in his rebellion. A wild dragon was also the one trying to explain to eragon what atoms were in Inheritance, they are 100% around before the fall

Must be peted!!!