Reiya9

Man this smut really downgraded the novel quality a lot

Suspended the next day for sexual harrasmemt amd the system leaves him amd then all the ghosts come for revenge and he dies

And then when Ellie does tobe will turn into madara uchiha and bring the fourth great ninja war

Ok I agree with you. All the points you stated where things that I also thought of that seemed off or forced. Honestly it was great having this conversation where we can agree and disagree on certain points. Made me more invested into the novel too than I was before. I hope the author can take some if these things and improve the novel for everyone to enjoy

Finally something interesting. Too 15 chapters to finally get into something beaides her assimilating her templates

Ok while I agree with you on the second paragraph I can’t agree on the first paragraph. You can’t forget that she is a reincarnated person. She was in high school when she died but even then she would be near like 7 years behind Clark if we assume she was a senior. Second Clark was naturally born so he didn’t have the kryptonian genes and instincts Ingraved into his body. Kara was made to be the best out of all the fields in this novel and even had instincts and can use her powers better since she actually knew about them all at this age. Even at the beginning she instantly learned the English language in seconds from what she had before. So I don’t think she should be as slow as Clark who was raised human and never uses or even knew his powers limits

He should just focus on using his magic for mana burst or enchantments. Instead of garbage spells he’s not even good at

Guess her whole life was just bullshit if she gave in this quickly. So much for her faith

Should just stick to secre. Really good relationship everyone else is just trash

If she even remotely care for him she would have fought to break the marriage right away when she found it he was forced into it and the way he is.