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Rome_Drori

Rome_Drori

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  • Rome_Drori
    Rome_Drori3 years ago
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    this piece of garbage *author* strikes again stealing other people's translations from elsewhere and having the gall to publish them not only publicly but as original works, please go find this novel on novel updates, and report the author if that is a feature

  • Rome_Drori
    Rome_Drori3 years ago
    回復 OverLordModz32

    please don't read this on here go support the people who are actually translating it and not just stealing others work like this phony *author* here, you should be able to find this book on novel updates

  • Rome_Drori
    Rome_Drori3 years ago
    回復 OmnipresenceBeing

    if you were it would not be public, so please set it to private or delete it you are stealing other people's work

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    Rome_Drori3 years ago
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    A piece of garbage as an *author*, they are just stealing these novels from translators in other places on the internet and putting them on here, the full translations are available elsewhere and are updated more frequently there, use sites like novel updates rather than supporting this piece of garbage

  • Rome_Drori
    Rome_Drori3 years ago
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    A rip of a translators work from elsewhere on the internet, please if your interested go read through the person who translated it's site. Translation there may not be officially authorized but it's better than reading it on a person who's stealing others works webnovel

  • Rome_Drori
    Rome_Drori3 years ago
    回復 Rome_Drori

    also AMAZING chap :)

  • Rome_Drori
    Rome_Drori3 years ago
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    Sidenote: but a little blerb saying XP is distributed after battle ends would be nice, ir at least that it's distributed In chunks if you plan to have her level up during a battle to win at some point, but it's a little confusing as to why she hasn't leveled up 5000, times and gotten enough stoned to evolve again

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    Rome_Drori3 years ago
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    writing.suffers from this unbearable slowness, author doesn't know how people talk or think and dialogue is painful to read. Things happen all of a sudden and a Japanese names are shoehorned in for no reason when compared to other more fantasy names. The author seems to want to write a pure angel of a protagonist but can do little more than telling us he takes care of his mother to connect the reader. To the author of you intend to keep writing please take a look at other stories in the same vain, like kumo desu ga nani ka, overlord, average, white fang etc, on other sites, and take some time to see how they build their worlds and dialogue. To end this off words like indeed don't make your writing sound sophisticated the way you use them but rather klunky, please if this is your first novel or you are not studying creative writing and classical literature, avoid the thesaurus problem, by this I don't mean using actually sophisticated words but rather using useless fluff words that mean nothing like indeed and reasonable in an excessive amount. Aside from that novel suffers from the " a woman spoke to me boss, he is very nice, She must be the company manager" syndrome and it's just very hard to read and take seriously. I can't bring myself to recommend this book in it's current state for any reason.as it's just a slog to read and oppressively boring.

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    Rome_Drori3 years ago
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    the Google translate is strong with this one