ContagiousFanatic

I'm haven't read it yet but why is there only 14 reviews on a 500 chapter FF) can anyone here explain. Either little people have seen it or the Author is just deleting reviews that are 5 stars

So what you're saying is, you are basically a horny teenager

You could use some improvement, but compared to some of the FF I've read, this one is Decent. I'm not exactly good at critiquing very well since I don't like hurting other people's feelings when they write stuff. after all, this is your hardwork. Granted, when reviewing I should be harsh as to make sure you realize the errors you've made but I'm sure experience and the others reviews would help you be better. That is of course, you're capable of withstanding the mistakes they've pointed out during reading the rest of the chapters.

Why was eyes chosen??? The moment the dudes eyes get pierced his done

I really don't like how you say that Brock abandoned his fucking family when the dude was RELUCTANT to leave nd was only convinced by his family to chase his dreams, the guy even had all his siblings likes and dislikes MEMORIZED, the dude loves his family and wouldn't abandon them just for his dreams.

Good world background, character design I dunno I forgot to be honest. Story development is good as well as writing quality with no grammar mistake in MY eyes and updating stability is good

Hotdog! This this one is actually good, not like other FF going to the mortal realm and go to konoha and act arrogant. This one is actually fire and has an incredible potential to be an amazing FF, I just hope it doesnt discontinue

I'm just gonna say the Writing Quality is decent since I can still understand them, the problem however, Is that it gets too exhausting trying to correct the grammar each time in my head while reading. It's good though keep it up

The amount of dueling is kinda annoying, amazing chapter as always but seriously. Can ya tone it down a bit it's kinda irritating I just want to see them enjoy a bit before having to duel. What I see is that after in their time being either 2 to 3 hours before dueling again or just straight up duel another person when defeating the previous opponent. This is just my opinion though

that's an embarrassing title if one were to actually have it