ContagiousFanatic

I'm just gonna say the Writing Quality is decent since I can still understand them, the problem however, Is that it gets too exhausting trying to correct the grammar each time in my head while reading. It's good though keep it up

The amount of dueling is kinda annoying, amazing chapter as always but seriously. Can ya tone it down a bit it's kinda irritating I just want to see them enjoy a bit before having to duel. What I see is that after in their time being either 2 to 3 hours before dueling again or just straight up duel another person when defeating the previous opponent. This is just my opinion though

that's an embarrassing title if one were to actually have it

wut?

how? it's just a play of words. Pay attention class, for words are much more dangerous than physical attacks

how? they're gods, this thing ain't a game it's reality? from my point of view it seems like they're less debuffed as in the game

ah yes, just like cliffhangers the bane of all readers

Because she was stopped by Yae before the Traveler actually died, goodness gracious the amount of youtube comments saying that the traveler can beat them has a stupidly amount of fanboys and girls. Can't even process information right and their thought process is quite unique, Traveler. Even with 100 Vision fueling them can barely keep up with a Raiden Shogun who didn't even look like she was trying at all.

This story was beautiful, Damn. I'm so glad that I managed to find this and read it. Well I guess too me it was a beautiful story, don't know about the others though so don't insult me as if I have bad taste. We all have different tastes and there's no pointing insulting them in what they like and dislike.

I read the first chapter and was immediately turned off by the amount of stupidity this thing exuded. You wanted to be the smartest and talented man ever? Richard Franklin is fit for the job- Nah make it Gojo Satoru, the dude who got bisected off-screen since he has talent after all... ( Six Eyes ). Lucifer Morningstar is strong... Nah let's change em to someone stronger ( weaker ). Like anus Voldgored Nd blah blah blah. Goodness gracious it's nighttime I can't think properly right now