Shain_Lee

Writer, i think you should just focus writing about being a forensic doctor and stop adding about romance which is not helping. The male lead is huge burden to the life of the female lead. Because of his actions the female lead always get into trouble.

This story is so messy and complicated. It's not worth to continue to read because there was no sense at all.

The female lead is very hypocrite, she pretends to be a decent woman but she uses her drunkenness as an excuse to seduce a married man. Her best friend, Casie is much way better than her, who has morals. Irish is a desperate slut or maybe worst than a whore😌Writer, change your female lead personality, please. Don't let your story becomes wasted by writing an indecent character or personality of your female lead

The story would have been good, but the male lead doesn't know how to think of a solution. He is weak and slow, and he needs to sacrifice a lot of people and even use people just to achieve his goals. Selfish and brainless male lead!😭 Common knowledge about pregnant woman should not grieve or be upset but what does the male lead's method, he only puts the female lead in danger and disaster. He only loves the female lead because she is useful to him. I suggest to change your disgusting male lead writer🤨How many women he needs to use just to achieve his goal, can't he do it alone without having to take advantage of people? Why he is so weak and troublesome? Much better if his forever in vegetable state😆

Hell🤨The female lead character is so weak and brainless. She has no ability to earn money and only knows how to rely on men by using her body. So disgusting & ambitious! No wonder her husband doesn't respect her because she don't deserve at all.

Hell🤨The female lead character is so weak and brainless. She has no ability to earn money and only knows how to rely on men by using her body. So disgusting & ambitious! No wonder her husband doesn't respect her because she don't deserve at all.

I don't like the character of the female lead. She is brainless and so weak. She deserved to be tortured by her husband because she is so ambitious. She only know how to rely on men. She has no ability or skill to work and earn money. I feel sorry for Vernom if he end up with her in the end. He deserve a smart, pure, kind and strong woman.

The story is unique and has originality. Exciting to read. GOOD JOB WRITER!👍

The male lead is kind a stupid and pervert. How can't he notice there is something wrong with his wife and so called sister.

The continuity of this story is being interrupted by presenting another scene different from theme of the story. Obviously the writer is just a beginner.