Eldwood_Kaumeheiwa

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

that's me!!!

they don't tell you the whole story because you make rookie mistakes quite often and repeatedly.

give the villagers common sense.... what does he know

100K to 30M talk about the price of stupidity

the mc is kinda dumb and does obviously dumb stuff quite often. I thought he developed out of that by now.

Cliffs Notes went the way of the encyclopedia !?!?! Booooooo

still one of the best graphic novels I've read

The story premise has a tried and true platform, but the story itself jumps off that platform and gives the same feeling as free falling into the unknown. the pacing seems rushed and jumps a bit. I find myself saying, "Uh, what?" almost every chapter I read. I read to the pay wall to give a benefit of the doubt but decided to stop at the wall.

this chapter is 2 paragraphs repeated over and over in different ways. "He kept looking to look at what he was looking at because he wanted to look at it."