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Oppenheimer resurrected!!! For good? Hopefully! No ranting or gibberish this Time (sadly for All m'y fan 🥲) but a genuine advise (totally discardable of course 👍), that's is: instead of formating each and every Time yours work (now that I say it, Why s'that?🤔), put them as Archive. Mermorabilia if You like🧐. But as always, You are free to take the advise of a slightly intellectual insane individual as You wish🫡. Even if The individual is a self-proclaimed "Expert" 😎. As He is learning from an "Expert" too. HIMSELF!!!

Copy paste isn't out right Bad as long as it IS assumed. If The author and sauce are given, it's sharing. And this is Indeed a master piece.

Oppenheimer IS BACK! 🍾 And his name isn't Oppenheimer still.🤔 Meh. Who Cares about my crazy gibberish 🤷. Welcome BACK Partner 👍 WE missed You 🥹 And in Hope this FF being a good one, here some approval

Just a small rant from my part. So ignore it as You wish. ALL of your stories are "Good", but riddle with flaws and inconsistance. And that's OK!!😁 They are Fanfictions, means to entertain, not flawless litterary bestseller. And they do their job: Entertaining. That's all they're is to ask.🥰 Now the small rant as promise. A brief critic of 3 of your work "not really to my taste": 1. Riser Phenex isn't a villain: as all your work have in common, this one too Say "fuck the plot", but more thoroughly; a little too much even. It's looks like something went wrong in the process, and then it goes "fuck it! I ain't fixing that. It's part of the plot now!". In this particular story, I felt that You are forcing way to much in practically everything. And it's going from comedic FF, to serious, to crack fic. Losing me in the way. 2. Is it wrong to become a scumbag: all in all a good FF. The MC has a goal, drive, character arc-ish, and a classic Akikan FF plot progression. A good point to highlight is the fact that the MC isn't "Préfecture" in this (in most Akikan FF the MC is mister perfect, borderline omnipotente). What makes me ranting here is that the entier story not in Rakudai Kishi feels like fillers, losing impact and coherence; throwing me out along the line. 3. Tanuki Rise of the yokau clan: criticizing this one was unpleasant ,'cause I love Nurarihon no mago, I FUKING LOVE IT. But it's called a rant for something, so let's move on. Fortunately, the Nurarihon no mago was impeccable (biased much), and the rest was OK-is. The réal problem was the MC, he is Too Perfect. It's like watching Saitama from One Punch Man, making us loose interest in the MC, and more focused one the secondary character, which are not dwelled on. Ok, that's it for the monthly ranting of a slightly crazy Guy with to much Time on his hand😎. ALL in all, I love your work, thank your for blessing us poor mortals with your magnificent Art. And good Day to You sir. 👍

Let us all be honest. It's the classic cliché Sign-in System Chinesse translates FF (decent translation by the way). The chance are good that it's just an édit for an existing translation ( which again ain't Bad). But that's just the premise. The story in it's self is, again, a cliché. BUT!!! a cliché is a cliché for a reason, and up to here (chap 23), it's quite Ok-ish. Will it remain is the question though. Either way, it's passable at best and slightly annoying at worst.So for now, TATAKAE!

YES! YES! YES! Finaly, I Can go read this FF black 🥳 without feeling annoyed. Martial arts and intense fight were the promise AT the begining, not an OP MC who bulldozed everything. Hère hoping "Real" change, at least.

This has nothing to do with this FF (even if I like it quite a bit 👍). Why isn't your pseudo not Oppenheimer! Each Time I see it, that's what I read! Oppenheimer!Oppenheimer!Oppenheimer! Pfiou ! 🧘 That's about it. Take it as the rant of a slightly crazy Guy with to much Time on his hand. A good Day to You sir.

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Pretty good so far, but with so few chap (10 for now), a deep review isn't possible. But here is a slight personal critic or advise (take it as you like, or not at all. Your choice) :It's obvious you are writing a "cliche" and comited to them. Which is GREAT ! CLICHÉ are the veine of fanfic, and I hope you "use" them and not be "used" by them. Just the slam rant of a nobody, but overall it's a good premice. Hope to see more of it.

Potential is there. Just as any classic jumpchain fic. But the grammar and the pace would need some improvement. Can't really review deeply with less than 10 chap. Either way, good start, and hopefully good story. I'm waiting it's evolution with baited breath. [img=recommend]