Eldritch_Umbra_2710

Easily one of the best stories I've read on WN. Aside from some minor grammar mistakes, I'd say the writing quality is top notch. The plot is quite interesting, and Crim makes for a fun protagonist. I'd really recommend this one.

It's clear the author puts a lot of hard work into their story. The story updates often, and not a chapter goes by that some kind of new information is introduced that makes the plot more interesting. Keep up the good work, author.

This story is in its very early days, so there is not much to be said as of yet. With that in mind, the first chapter is written well, and it flows nicely. The opening of the second chapter is quite jarring, and not exactly in a good way, due to the writing being a good bit clunkier than before. However, this is something that improves with time and experience. Good luck, author. I'll be glad to give this another look in the future.

This made me laugh

This novel has an interesting premise, and its opening chapters are certainly a ride. The story itself is well written, though suffers from stiff word choice . 4.2/5

This novel is very well written, and certainly has an interesting premise. personally, I'd find it hard to love someone after being sold into slavery, but I'm interested enough to see how Purple decides to go about this. The only issues with the story have to do with weak word choice and minor grammatical errors, though none of them are bad enough that they can't be fixed within ten-fifteen minutes.

This is a very interesting novel. The story starts slowly, but it takes quite the turn by the time the second chapter rolls around, which should inspire readers to continue reading. The only thing to really hit the story on is the writing quality. While the plot itself is easy to follow, the actual flow and penmanship is where things fall through. Descriptions are much too abrupt, and as always, (inside joke of mine), Numbers aren't letters, and they shouldn't be used when the number described is less than one hundred. Overall, an excellent and intriguing story that suffers from penmanship that requires some optimization is all. I recommend this story, and wholeheartedly congratulate the author on making something special.

The first chapter can make or break a novel. The way implications are used to lead the reader on is quite effective, and the further one reads into the story makes the first chapter that much better. For once, there's very little for me to critique, beyond a recommendation of more extensive proof reading and editing before posting a chapter, as despite how great the first chapter is, the way it's written can be a little hard to follow. Aside from that, this novel is excellent and I think it's certainly worth a recommendation. 4.8/5

It is exceedingly rare that I come across a work of such high quality on this platform. Gotterdammerung is by far the best written work I have read as of late. A sense of urgency is well expressed by the chapters, and chaos is well portrayed. The reader is also kept on the edge of their seat with the expertly written stingers at the end of each chapter, and left wanting to read more. The fast pace of the story further keeps the reader involved with the story by providing not only a well built experience, but also further promising that a greater one is right around the corner, and that breeching that corner will be no major difficulty. When I read an action story, pace and flow are very important to me, and as previously mentioned here, they are carried out quite well, what with how Seraphim in action are described. Action scenes are clear cut, and the dialogue is written concisely, and it sounds quite a lot like how the actual military sounds, which adds a level of grounding to the story which doesn't clash with the very clearly implied advanced setting. I am very excited to see where this story goes, and will recommend it to and beyond anyone ready this review.