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I think a training montage, would be nice.
Thanks
百年修仙,我快死了金手指才来, raw
Great chapter, I'm enjoying this story.
Great chapter, thanks. I liked the interactions between the trio.
Great chapter. I enjoyed this one the most so far, especially with the slight info dumps you gave, makes a lot of things I was unsure about make sense. I noticed on third paragraph, second line you said "pantses" I think plural is still pants. Thanks for chapter, this one felt more exciting. But I might just like fighting.
Great chapter. I'm excited to see him fight, this will be the first proper fight we see. Cam Han Jin and Fatty Wan not cultivate at all, or do they just have bad cultivation talent? Thanks.
Hey, Mr. HandsomeWriter I love the new story so far. Although I haven't read enough to make a good analysis of your story. I enjoy the way your story doesn't drag unnecessary scenes or explanations. It seems to be more to the point and I enjoy the premise of the mystical book, even though we don't know much about it yet. Keep writing! Looking forward to future chapters.
Great chapters, very interesting. I binged all 28 chapters. I'm looking forward to more.
I understand that's an erotic scene ,but isn't that too much? Bleeding like that over naked women, that's anime over reaction .But he's only 8, even if he has mentality of older guy and even that perk ,he still shouldn't be that horny. But whatever do your thing I suggest tone down reactions like that