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missing romance tag, 50 % of the book is romance, book cover shows a guy with two blades in wilderness, tags speak about adventure and action, its all misleading, 50% of novel is romance.

flowery language, stretched plot, lonely MC, only growth with no reason behind powerup, dry, ..............................................................

author.... your language is too flowery. This book will see no success... it feels like you are forcing words.

absolute trash , china 100% .......................................................................................................................

nothing happens, MC didn't do anything whole 50 chapters, MC forgot who is Obito but remembers Iruka sensei... This story is complete nonsense.

the writing is very boring, not much happens but a lot of text is written. {needs more text, needs more text, needs more text, needs more text, needs more text, }