Devin1

Hello everyone, Author here. I want to say that this is my very first time writing a story. So, if you enjoy reading my work, I will appreciate it if you guys tell me your thoughts about this story. Other than that, I wish everyone a wonderful day :)

this story really is interesting. It's like a fantasy game where everything is based on stats. I'm interested onto what the Mc will ask the blacksmith to teach him :).

I like the idea the author has, and I could see the potential in this story. I'm interested on how the warriors fit in into all this since it looks to be only mages.

It's very different from the stories that I read. But overall, I like it. hopefully you will be able to post more so that not only me gets to read it, but others het to as well.

The story definitely has a lot of potential to grow. There is a bit of errors in the story but overall, its good. Can't wait to see what happens next :)