ARKirby
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ARKirby3 years ago發表Opps, I was so caught up with reading that I forgot to leave a review lol 😅 IMO this is a fantastic story with a quality flow. The fact that this isn't written in your first language is mindblowing! Not many novels are as well written as yours (and their first language is English). The story's plot is intriguing, and the detail you have put into worldbuilding paints a perfect picture in the readers' minds. It's like an all-in-one package deal! I will be following along to see how this ends. Keep going!
- ARKirby3 years ago發表
It's a very intriguing story so far. Nicely written, and the flow is incredible. I think the mysteriousness of all the characters had me adding it to continue later, but it could have been the way you tell the story. Keep it up!
- ARKirby3 years ago發表
I really had no other choice but to add this to my library. It’s witty, entertaining, and well written. A genuine rare diamond that I will be sure to follow along with! You’re doing a fantastic job!
- ARKirby3 years ago發表
Awe I feel for Emma, but her ex was an absolute tool anyways. 🙄 His friend, Jason, on the other hand… 😏 This story just grips you and forces you to read on to know what happens next. Before I knew it I was deep in chapter 6 lol 😅 Overall the story is very interesting, I look forward to more chapters! Keep it up!
- ARKirby3 years ago發表
Nicely done, especially since this is your first time writing in your second language! Btw the ailen’s kinda remind me of the ones from Home 😅
