A Faliure.
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The writing quality is very good. Far better than other novels in this genre, at least. The plot is also pretty unique, except for the common transmigration troupe. The story progression is quite slow for my taste, but the world-building is super nice, so I'm gonna give this a pass. Overall, I'll say I liked it. But my opinion of this definitely would've been higher if the pacing was a little faster (faster uploads will work too).
Let's hope I don't die again this year T_T And I'm truly flattered that you liked this newbie's work <3
Welp, what can I say? Typical webnovel authors, I guess.
This chapter really made me wrack my brains, author. Now my head hurts... T_T
Note taken. I'll try to make the story progress faster from now.
If you want to drop after the first mini arc (ends at chapter-16), I will have nothing to cry about. But please give it a try till then. Also, thanks for giving this a try <3
It's a spoiler, but I'll spoil you anyway. The system is a default game system, and the one forcing quests on MC dies off pretty soon.
First of all, thank you for giving this novel a try. I really appreciate it <3 Also, I'm very sad to know that you dropped it this early. Please try to continue to chapter 10, and if I still can't hook you to this story, I'll admit that I'm absolutely incompetent as an Author.
It's not the "Heaven" from Christian myth. "Heaven" has a different meaning in eastern fantasy, which is similar to "Sky" or "So powerful that they seem unreachable like the skies above".
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