0TheFool0

I understand. But don't worry too much if I, or other people, didn't like this development very much, the important thing is that you keep writing the way you like, because it's your writing that made this story good, if you listen a lot to the comments your story will become some more meaningless wish fulfillment with a giant harem, I particularly think it's interesting that you leave the story the way it is now, without romance and no harem.

I didn't particularly find this development in history interesting. I don't think it's a problem for the author to create some antagonists for the protagonist, but I think that in this specific case, it didn't work very well. I don't think you could correctly convey the intentions you had when bringing this character, Samuel, I think it was very hasty the way you handled things, in my opinion, you should have avoided a direct confrontation between him and the protagonist, and done something more indirect, such as, for example, Samuel had only observed the MC and left soon after. That's just my honest opinion, keep up the good work!

Author, please don't make a big harem, quality over quantity, as a wise man out there used to say: "Big harems, spoil great stories"

Author, please don't make a big harem, quality over quantity, as a wise man out there used to say: "Big harems, spoil great stories"

Seraph should find a way to "see" mana, this would help him understand the principles of magic, and "new" ways of applying magic based on what he sees in nature, using, for example, mana manipulation in other ways.

He can use the magic circle as a basis for his pseudo-immortality, I think it would be an interesting direction to research.

I have some ideas of possible abilities for the MC: 1- he can use gravity to teleport himself, or he can distort the space between him and the place he wants to get, like him taking a step and arriving at a place several miles ahead, but for that would be necessary a way to observe where he wants to get, I think, something like a demonic eye, or using the eyes of a family member to be able to see the desired place. 2- He can use gravity to fight in the air with a sword, using mini repulsion in the air just below his feet to gain instant momentum in the air, like Soru from One Piece, after all it is necessary to use his feet in fencing.

I agree with you, a lonely search for power is much more interesting to read, and there are not many on this site. #noharem #noromance

Will he learn more breaths? I hope so, and thanks for the chapter!

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