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Nah, This ain't it. This has potential but Author, this style of narrating the movie in a written format... messes up the writing flow. The flow breaks in the last 2 chapters, were too noticeable.

Again with the dialogue inconsistencies. The MC simply does feel like he's part of the play. Idk if the author was going for it but man, this is hard to get past.

I didn't want to be rude but the dialogue flow is so bad that half of the things just don't make sense to me. Maybe because the characters are aged 5 y/o atm, so that's how they talk but still, I found the dialogues and interactions forced and inconsistent at times. The MC's love for the bugs seems forced, with the way of his talking. I mean if he's an adult already then, this kind of overhyped "acting", I believe is pointless.

Honestly speaking, overall this is a bad piece of work. I would Any future reader would do well to start off at chapter 16 rather than chapter 1. But the thing is that the initial chapters were way way better than the recent ones. Imho, the recent ones have very little thought put into them and pretty much 99% movie in a writing format.

Taste? What's even there to discuss about taste? Some things are downright bad and wrong. And this is a picture perfect example of that. Pretty much the last 15 Chapters are a waste of time for the readers. And I personally don't believe they contribute to the story in any kind of way, whatsoever.

When will the MC grow up a bit. Coz at the moment his thinking is a bit too naive for a war filled era.

My man, you've a pretty extensive piece. I've added it to my library but unfortunately I don't have as much time these days. I like what I've read so far but it hasn't been much. But the review will be a bit late, till I catch up to the latést one.

Idk why people think this is a good fic but I can't help but disagree. In my honest opinion it's a below average quality fic which degrades the original ideas, not an upgrade so to speak. Minato's talents are nerfed so much so that he probably matches upto "Academy level obito" right now. The training decisions are totally brain-dead. The devil fruit ability is a place holder text to increase word count, serves no purpose at all. It's making mockery of Naruto and One Piece at the same time. And the character lack any sort of depth. I mean the author really tried, the effort can be seen but the execution is mediocre at best.