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Great Novel all in all First off, Writing quality: Amazing loved the inclusion of Spanish (Fun time trying to understand without the translation), Overall no grammatical mistakes (That I can remember), Story Development: Great, Personally love the scheming, the transmigration was done pretty smoothly, the memory inheriting was well done, all around great Character Design: Love the girls Sierra is great, very cute, Milia is a very well done character, (author cooked), Myra seems like a very interesting character, love her villain vibe (actually now that I realise it, we've got the trinity, Shy and Adorable, Lively and Lovely, Hot and crazy) Damien/Daniel(that's the transmigrator's name if I remember correctly) we've got bad cop good cop in one body here, Damien is the better main for the story, but still having Daniel affect some of Damien's choices is great character, and having Damien affect Daniel when he was the main was also great (Dunno if I've read too many cultivation novels, but it kinda represents the "good and evil" part of yin and yang) I feel kinda bad for original MC, he's getting his girl fucked, and he thinks the man that fucked his girl is helping him lmao Updating Stability: Need I say more? there hasn't been a new chapter since last month World Background: Great so far, there hasn't been confusion as of yet going good so far

I wish

I don't like edging, it's painful

Japanese LN title

Refine Gu! Refine Human! Refine Heaven!

Kirby had to become more Edgy

it said, "family of four"

Skill issue? Time to git gut

OK just realised, MC please powertrip all the way, you have given yourself plot armour x infinity

I like this novel a lot, arguably MC is a little childish for my taste so far. But let's be honest, I came here for the Plot, not the plot, so it's a minor inconvenience