ChildishSin

Fine im givung you a rating. But I think you should change the pic of the fanfic to something more interesting especially when its minimized by webnovel.

This story has no merit of existing other than I want to make my pairing possible. Nothing changes and all that happens in the beggining is a contrived reason as to why it wouldn't change.

yeah right he literally changed character so abruptly i thought it was him accepting his destiny to reach his true freedom as the king of hell but no i guess

Who is it?

And the stort could be about peoples acceptance of their inevitable death. Or not *CHOMP*.

that is not leblanc. That is fricking morganna

So for me right now its decent. The main character at thr start was the mist annoying and incompetent character I've ever read about. but acter like 10 chapters all that whiny talk was gone and well he was still whiny but atleast its not in my face. Also the main characters motivation is still pretty cheap right now. But I think to solidify it just give him some sort of event that can make him truly test himself and just don't rush it you have all the time in the world.

I really want this guy to just lose and die already .

I already do not like this idiot.

why is leblanc here?