Senpai_Baka

But keep going practice makes perfect and get better along the way ^^

The synopsis seems ok and the First line in the Novel. You do a lot of unnecessary skipping lines in the Novel, like there's no paragraph just sentence ( i don't know if that's the Aim but yeah), Also you use the quotation mark not so well, at the very beginning you used them just fine, but then you started using the dash thing (hypen, i think ) and you should write the speech in quotation and then put the person speaking on the outside. This is Opinion anyway

Nice opening line

I went through it and it's not that bad seems to be an interesting story, but you should really separate the dialogue from the actual story, if not it may come off confusing. You also open quotation and close it sometimes, It also seem like you were writing in third person but then it changed to first person. This is just my Opinion

Sure why not

I keep losing my account so I stopped writing