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This actually made do a head banging but i couldn't stop smiling
Im only 40 chapter's in and im already dying slowly not only did a lot of ooc happened but the mc is like an arrogant wuxia master who everyone praises even tho sometimes his on the wrong or not even question how he can do this things and my guy literally just revealed everything from the start like no distrust what so ever just pure out trust no build up it's like there old buddies,them having to master techniques that took time and understanding specially all the naruto jutsu's and got the flying thunder god technique without even studying or understanding it he didn't even buy a skill that can help him be smarter and understand things,stats,or the system indicating he can learn them it doesn't matter with the foreshadowing different worlds better training bullshit luffy had too fight to be creative and sometimes do training arc's plus his just a random normal person who's soul got soul snatched,and him not having personality what so ever, let's not even think that he didn't give a fuck about his past life like he accepted everything and just move on speaking of moving on this got stale and boring I know luffy world the early parts has weak enemies but come on this mtf who has only techniques as clutch for fighting has no training or any sorts of fighting styles who just managed to beat a lot of them especially damaging mihawk and not even having a hard time against his first enemy or even on the arlong fight my man didn't even suffered no struggled except for a moment of pause of his first kill he didn't even lament it after the fight,all im gonna say is this novel sucks it feels more like ability and power circle jerk because if this is just repeat of every anime but he just goes thru everything with little too no change, personality development and im out of this boat early on it feels like every generic every isekai anime ever or group chat but dumb down instead of a harem is just power circle jerk then this shit is fucked, I don't care if the plot is done before for me is how you will flesh out this worlds and all i see is just basically those shitty wattpad y/n or character self insert ooc but with powers that no one would even question,man just at least give him something too struggle on.
Hope he doesn't become a narcissistic overpowered unbearable character that is a merry sue with a massive harem and will kill people just cause he got looked funny.
He did tho how did you think a mini kakashi was born spurted out of the ground like the rest of us
This caught me off guard and made me spit my coke a bit
Well im out there is so much plot holes and lack of world building i can ignore
No we just don't want cardboard copy of girls that doesn't makes sense for them too fall in love too the mc,or crush that will ultimately fail.
Yeah me too feels forced plot/romance by the Rob (author)
Which shade are we talking about?
Shanky chappy