I'm new to WN, but I do have 3 award-winning works on Ringdom. Hope you will give my stories a chance here.
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Good luck. Hope you can edit and polish your chapters.
A good premise, but the world building is very weak. Characters have no depth and the opening scenes are inconsequential. It's just hasty, with no real stakes involved and feels like it's written by an AI. Certainly a good idea, but lacks emotions and driving goals/objectives that can move the plot forward by building a good narrative.
Kevin needs to adjust his sensitivity settings first. Also, Cassandra might be jealous.
That's good to know. Thanks for checking in on me. I appreciate it. Hopefully, things will be sorted soon and I can resume this story too. :)
Hello there. Yes, I am doing alright. Been a long time since I have updated this book. Was dealing with some issues. How are you?
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Nope. Definitely not the racer.
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