Trollwoman

I recently went back to reading on alternative sites, and I remembered my password of this account . I remember very well that I started reading your other novel, Rise Online, last year and then it was difficult to keep up because I have no money. But here I am again, and I'll be reading this new novel as much as possible for me.... Of course I always have to leave my reviews on your novels lol

I have been reading the author's other novel for a long time and he has never disappointed me. This new novel looked more promising than the previous one, I will definitely follow it, especially since the grammar of this novel is very good!

After reading more than 20 chapters, I feel free to do a review: Writing Quality - Despite making mistakes in some things that I think are normal, the author manages to develop the paragraphs very well, always connecting them in a way that makes us read quickly and fluidly. Stability of Updates - Very good! Chapters every day is the minimum I ask to give 5 stars. Story Development - For now? Perfect. It managed to insert many good mysteries and is also not making the script predictable, because it is always breaking a cliché here and there. Character Design - Very good. Although I miss the descriptions of the characters' clothes, it contributes to the fluidity I commented on in the first topic. The characters' personalities also pleased me, because humanity shines through. World Background - It hasn't developed the whole world yet, but the cities it has developed seem really cool and alive. A great novel, with a very promising future. I'm looking forward to seeing how everything develops and maintains quality.

This Looks Good

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