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Is this an MTL cause ain’t no way I just got done reading like 3 chapters and I can barely understand like there are so many words misspelled and grammar needs improvement like at some points you can understand what’s going on but then we drop in quality and you can barely read it I hope when you make your next chapter please reread what you wrote or if this is a MTL then use Grammarly or something anyway’s I’m out.

Oh my bad gang so he has chakra but still in my opinion don’t enjoy that he isn’t the only Hyuga I guess that is my only pet peeve I’ll keep reading the story. But I have a question are you planning to do a Hyuga titan shifter like that could be pretty cool to have a huge ass titan doing a rotation or something ?

Alright I finished all the chapters so far and I got say so far it is good but I do have problems with the story first why did this god not give the mc chakra like make him unique in the story like the mc had found a way to use his byakugan with this life energy bs and if this is life energy could be used by the mc It can be used by other people second there is a Hyuga clan in this making the mc to me feel less special. The mc barley knows the story of AOT up to season 2 which doesn’t even matter cause it’s gonna be even more dangerous with the changes like in my mind I don’t see anyway the mc would be able to survive in this world without plot it’s not like he can create ninjutsu he is restricted to Hyuga techs.

We all the know the drill here

This whole line to me feels a little brain dead where was this questioning attitude when he was killing off his rouge gallery and other villains like is Norman so special that he needs to question his choice of killing him like he did. This just makes me think that Peter wanted to do a Batman and Joker thing like he wants to kill him and make him suffer for all the pain he has caused but is going to just beat him up and take him to jail so he could breakout and repeat the process.

Is he gonna say this everytime Danzo tries to fight him with a decision

Baby - kid zoro

Shit never mind

I have been watching a lot of 7 Deadly Sins finishing the anime and going to season of four knights of the apocalypse so let’s just get this over with I would like an Overpowered Mc right from the start so here are some suggestions either he can have Meliodas template or my favorite a true king a king of chaos Arthur Pendragon he basically is a god with reality manipulation and other op powers that will take time to list I mean he became Chaos the being who created most of everything in the verse.