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Guard_the_Azkaban

Guard_the_Azkaban

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2021-10-24 加入Uruguay
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  • Guard_the_Azkaban
    Guard_the_Azkaban2 days ago
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    What will this version have that's different from the previous one besides minor events? Because if it stays the same, there's no point in reading it; it would feel repetitive.

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    Guard_the_Azkaban5 days ago
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    We've barely started and I'm already losing interest, the author makes the mc dumb in an attempt to seem funny and generate "comedy", honestly that way of forcing it takes away all the appeal of the comedy and the fact that mc loses intelligence despite being a reincarnator takes away the appeal of the entire fic, it feels like those FFs in which mc is submissive to all women for the simple fact of being beautiful women and in which mc makes rookie mistakes just to generate plot, not to mention the attitude of his sister and the intelligent system, I sincerely hope it improves with time and I will give it a chance, if my opinion on the FF improves I will change my rating in the future.

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    Guard_the_Azkaban7 days ago
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    This is Saeko in this fic, so is there going to be a zombie apocalypse? This is Saeko in this fic, so is there going to be a zombie apocalypse?

  • Guard_the_Azkaban
    Guard_the_Azkaban12 days ago
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    This story could be better if it had a better explanation, things sometimes happen for no reason, I still don't understand why everyone hates Esther when none of them would have been born if it weren't for the deal she made and that doesn't take away the fact that she tried to offer herself in place of her daughter, then there's the point of mc's personality, it's crap honestly as is the family dynamic, it's horrible but passable. But the worst thing in this novel is the flowery language that the author uses to make each of the things that the characters do seem great, like explaining how ominous the sound that mc makes when he walks is or how deep the unexpressed feeling is in his eyes. It's a novel with potential but it loses a lot of it as it progresses and not to mention that the system doesn't make sense

  • Guard_the_Azkaban
    Guard_the_Azkaban12 days ago
    回復 YoDarki

    Yes, I already know that, my question is if it is edited or modified in some way that differentiates them since one is more advanced than the other, so if it is not modified I read the one with more chapters.

  • Guard_the_Azkaban
    Guard_the_Azkaban13 days ago
    回復 YoDarki

    Author, is this just a translation of the other or is it edited and changed?

  • Guard_the_Azkaban
    Guard_the_Azkaban17 days ago
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    Author please clarify this issue. I saw in the comments that the female protagonist has a yuri romance, does that mean MC is a cuckold? Because this will determine if I read this story or not. I have no interest in NTR whatsoever, so please clarify the situation, even if it gives a spoiler, please.

  • Guard_the_Azkaban
    Guard_the_Azkaban19 days ago
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    In which chapter does Mc create Ferreon's evolutionary trigger? I forgot which one it was

  • Guard_the_Azkaban
    Guard_the_Azkabana month ago
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    When will the MC give the pokemon to his children?