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Really bad writing, story wise and prose wise. Its a headache to read, cringe and forced with no set up. Not worth reading. Àaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Seems to me like bad writing when multiple people complain about being confused.
Stfu
I was so exited 6 chapters in, it had such good potential. Good characterisation, good prose and grammar. But the further I read the less it felt like naruto. The battles suck and they are very few and far between. The story pacing is incredibly slow and the plots are just a snore. Very disappointed with it to be honest, I feel cheated, and feel like I just wasted my time.
Honestly, a funny, wholesome and entertaining first few chapters. Keep up the great work mate. I'm eager to continue.
It's so great that you bring it up. That's the whole point, the courtroom presents itself according to the amount of knowledge about the legal system Locke has. Since he had no interest in such stuff, he naturally doesn't know, hence why he was so thoroughly thrashed around. Naturally, that will change. This was more of a back-and-forth argument than an actual trial. I'm glad I was able to convey that properly!
He totally did LOL
couldn't have put it better myself
I'm very glad that's the case. I look forward to your continued support and feedback.
That is an amazing question! It is explained that the quirk has its own consciousness, that runs based on his memories. That does not mean it has his biases. meaning it's its own entity. Now considering that this is a hero society, and they are in I-island, I would say that his moral compass would have a heroic inclination, even if its subconscious. Now in a way, he is restricted by the quirk. if he decides to be a villain out of nowhere, his quirk will not just up and change just to agree with him. he will be judged, and if his reasoning for doing villainous acts is deemed sound enough, then it will allow it. this quirk acts as a guiding hand, leading him to become the best version of himself. That means that if he misuses his powers and kills let's say, a crowd of people for no reason, the quirk will pull him into the court of self and he will be tried for misues of his quirk, and he may lose the ability to use it depending on the sentencing. So I would say, yes and no to him being a slave to it. If he has a solid explanation and wins the trial, he will be capable of doing whatever he wants. if he doesn't win, however, then he will receive a just punishment. does that answer your question? if you have any more, please, feel free to ask, I love conversing on this.