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He has the experiences of zelretch, but he is still a 17 year old. He is mature and at the same time not. He knows how to get along in the world, but sometimes he is reckless. He is also aware of his shortcomings and always seeks to improve. English is not my first language by the way.

Good characters, especially the MC, mature and OP while immature and inexperienced, he is a more complex character than 99% of those on this site. The world is well written, it is credible and it feels alive, it is not just a place for the MC to act, the protagonist is just one component of a larger scheme and that gives greater longevity and quality to the story. the secondary characters are more of the same, charismatic and organic, they are not just an NPC at the MC's disposal. Finally, the update is almost daily and the author is seen active with the novel, so all is well with the updates. In summary 9.9 / 10

Isn't it better like this? A slow pace that establishes the foundations of a story with good characters that allow you to empathize with them. This site is full of novels with flat, boring and annoying characters, I like how this webnovel develops for now.

I think issei should have a harem, after all it is his goal. I like that the MC only has one love interest.

Good chapter, I like the dichotomy of the MC, he is an immature young man, but at the same time experienced, although he never lived these experiences, they allow him to know himself and know what he wants and what he needs in a way that a teenager could not. He knows how to analyze his surroundings and read the situation. He is quite an interesting character.

hopefully you're right, if it were a mediocre novel I wouldn't even comment, the story you put together is interesting that's why I commented, greetings

I did not like how the romance with Artoria was approached, it came out of nowhere, they have known each other for practically nothing, it seems that the MC only takes advantage of lonely women. I'm not against a well-built harem, but I found it too sudden. Too bad I was liking the novel.

I don't understand why there are people who rate this work badly, I think this is one of the best webnovels on the site, I like all the characters of the main cast, their interactions are interesting, their ties grow stronger every moment. I'm not a big fan of the combat continent novels, but this novel made me want to be, the world is very organic and its characters feel alive, the author knows what he's doing so I don't understand how there are people who make reviews without sense. I've read too many mediocre webnovels to know that this is far from them. Great fanfic.

Very good story, you explained everything precisely, the main couple is really good and the fights are quite fun. The best thing is how you explained the powers and the relationship he shares with his teachers is very nice, the MC is very op, but his enemy is also broken. I would recommend you put the tag of noharem, so maybe more people can see your novel. Entertaining novel, I look forward to more chapters.