Tobi_One_Kenobi

idk if you thought readers would think he is cooler or something by doing this

should've left it for the mc

i love this ff🤣🤣🤣🤣

pov is wtong here

i dont need to be a good writer to criticise bad writing. If readers weren't allowed to speak their mind on how they feel about an authors work, how would an author improve.

take her for yourself

you shoild see him now , no chapters in nine months

i thought summoning echoes was free, and the 1000 was just to turn them into shadows

mha fandom saturated with the unfunniest jokes in existence

then you're being too descriptive with this, and alot of the time, it seems like you're just repeating the same points from earlier chapters but with different adjectives. i mean, all that's been happening on repeat so far is , "he enjoys sunlight." , Mark saying he's not old enough to play, and his dad says he's strong. read through it again if you dont beleive me.