krokrok007

how would some stranger know that?

Its good but the chapter 5 feels really over dramatic and him being reincarnator doesnt have any big impact. And the whole family drama feels forced together with author sometimes writing something in one chapter and then writing almost identical paragraph in the next. now good points it doesnt have almost any gramatical mistakes and the characters are written pretty well and it being one of few magi fanfics give it bonus points.

how is it going? did you have Fun with da Vinci

yeah my bad, thanks for fixing it.

because thats what da Vinci would say

thanked