JokerJay75

it the right time when gohan was born. the author f*ck up how much time has passed.

you sound like this guy

can his next peerage member be someone from fairy tail.

isn't it still too early for thor

I hate this option

decent but again there's mistakes like double spaces between words. sometimes you forget to put quotation marks to show when someone is speaking. you also forget to put some words in the sentence and other times you use the wrong words in the sentence.

decent chapter but a few mistakes here and there. could use some improvement in writing.

huh why would he cover his other eye?

the second half of the the chapter is confusing