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I don't really read tropes like these, but after the first few chapters, I've changed my mind quite a bit. The story for Xandria so far is very comedic and almost sounds like a satirical plot. I also enjoyed the overprotective brother trope, which isn't something I see in most genres of novels. Overall, the plot, chapter quality, and story development for the novel are done well. The author doesn't struggle with pacing, nor do they ever struggle with grammatical issues. Everything is well written and I hope for the best for this novel! Happy writing~

thx for the chap

I assume all the meddling and interference with her brothers means an obsessive trope mayhaps be coming.

LOL, Marcus is all about business xd

overprotecting brother trope interesting

I liked the premise and introduction of this novel! There's a lot to discuss in terms of development, world background and such, but all I can say is that the author has hit all marks for me. I often find that within novels, the pacing tends to be short or too long, but the author executes pacing and transition effectively here with his plot. Now my only suggestion I have for you is just splitting up those chunky paragraphs. I'm not saying having full sentences is bad, but I believe that if you split sections up, you create a better overall reading flow.

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Well done on the introduction! I found it quite funny that he got beat up on sight but eh it's what it is.

This is a great story for those who enjoy a well-paced novel. The author excels in terms of writing quality, character development, world-building, and overall storytelling. It's remarkable how well-written this novel is, especially considering that English is not the author's first language! Please keep writing author and keep up the good work!

ty for the chap