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Tysm! I appreciate the review!
XD tysm for the review!
Oooh, I'm glad you liked it!
Ty for the review! ^w^
Yepsss
Wondering that as well, not sure XD
Eyyy I'm from the Philippines too I mentioned it in my book rin actual XD
Ohhh, where are you from? Just curious ^w^ also have you tried grammerly? It's rlly good even the free version
The world background is amazing and unique, grammer could be improved, there are a lot of terms that I still struggle to understand, but the characters are pretty well written and I do love a good fantasy!
This chap is a bit of an info dump, and a little hard to process, I couldn't understand most of the references and I'm still fairly confused what a world fragment is, but I like the fantasy setting and I find this pretty good so far