MrKingCraft

A rabid dog would be a better description if I'm imagining it right. The common dog can convey a multitude of emotions even with a stoic appearance.

Didn't read re:?

How about you write your own fanfic where everything is how you want it to be, or you can just read and stop complaining for no reason

W pops

Good chapter over all. A few mistakes and inconsistencies but it should be fixed in time. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it but for now have a power stone.

Narcissist tendencies so quick into the story...

Very fast time skip. Maybe a bit more background information would've helped especially since he just dropped in cultivation and I think the reaction was a bit too dry. If I had spent many years building up something only for it to fall and have me start over again, even if I could feel that the foundation of the building is stronger, I would still be extremely sad.

This came a bit too fast. Maybe you could've told us where he sat down and how he sat down to cultivate so that it's easier to visualize and it adds to the word count. Also to make this sudden act seem more realistic , at the end of the previous paragraph, you could've said that he was to weak to enter the forest and if he wanted to enter he'd have to get stronger. Then you could wrote about him going off to cultivate.

my arms*

You should use [These] for the system to so that the readers can properly differentiate between the system and other text.