Cinderela_de_Viel

Hi! I don't know if the notifications are working... Sometimes it seems my last reply has disappeared. Can you read my reply with my email and some information about Cinderella Monogatari — The Sequel?

Awesome! I’m glad you enjoyed my review. :)

You’re welcome and I apologize for my missprints. I found some missing words afterwards and I can’t edit now. Sorry... Actually, I’d love to chat with you about the series and invite you to be a special proofreader of my Cinderella Monogatari sequel. Is there any way we can share private messages here? I only registered on this platform a few days ago.

I’m so happy to find this fanfiction of Cinderella Monogatari. As a big fan and a fanfiction writer of this series, I totally recommend this story. The author works between the gaps, fixing the plot holes of the original anime, particularly evident in the last episodes, when Charles seems so out of character. Charles and Cinderella have so much chemistry in the anime, but the potential is totally waisted at the end of the original series, so this an important compensation. Perhaps it could be more humorous sometimes, or keep Charles’ naughtiness and their small arguments, but it is nice the way it is. I understand this is based on the anime, and not a copy of it. Thankfully, Cinderella is much more interesting here - she reads and fights, being more active than in the anime. Moreover, it is interesting to see how the author erased magic and the animals, enhancing the realism that marks the original series. Thus, I believe this could be a great plot for a live action series... To be honest, I only missed the statue in the main square that means a lot to Charles. I love his speech about it - and at that moment we grasp that he was more interested in History after all. In my opinion, the political dimensions interactions between architecture and the characters are one the most interesting aspects of the city. That’s why I also missed some political lines that touched particularly in the series - when Charles questioned the throne in episode 16 and his duel with Zaral in the last episode. However, I understand your main plot focuses on Charles and Cinderella and you definitely delivered. Congratulations and keep up with the good work!