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bonnie_jlxu

bonnie_jlxu

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when love is love

2021-08-13 加入Canada
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  • bonnie_jlxu
    bonnie_jlxu3 years ago
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    I like where the story is going, it captures the attention of the readers well. There are a few grammatical errors, and the prologue is a bit heavy with exclamation marks. However, in general, this works is really interesting. Keep it up, author!

  • bonnie_jlxu
    bonnie_jlxu3 years ago
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    This story caught my attention fairly easily. The author did a great job making in tiniest detail interesting. I highly recommend this story to all readers, and before you know it, you would be craving for more...