Have you ever wondered about that one girl sitting in an open cafeteria and doing only one thing..... writing, yeah I wonder about her too
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Thank you for the reviews and support you give me, I will be replying to your comments now. Keep reading please. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like the second chapter very well, it was well edited and has great punctuation. I would like to see you write many more books in times to come, and I hope you get better at this.
I like this book I don't really enjoy reading but this was an exception, please keep writing, you're a great writer, hope you gain more fame!