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Renol_devin

Renol_devin

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Iam a longtime reader and avid fan of webnovel.

2021-07-31 加入India
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  • Renol_devin
    Renol_devina month ago
    回復 linh_lemon

    cultivation: taking things to extreme

  • Renol_devin
    Renol_devin2 months ago
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    It didn't feel like i was reading a novel. It has style of time skip chapters in ordinary novels. Coupled with very short chapters, the pace of the novel is something else.

  • Renol_devin
    Renol_devin2 months ago
    回復 Renol_devin

    do it in moderation. don't think all other players are idiots.

  • Renol_devin
    Renol_devin2 months ago
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    It had a nice concept. But the pace of the story is so fast. He scores two or three goals in everymatch, even though he is only seventeen years of age. It absolutely kills concept of progression. If he scores like that from the start what would happen ten years later? Scoring hatrick and double hatrick every game?

  • Renol_devin
    Renol_devin2 months ago
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    I liked the idea of abandoning Chinese national team. At least i don't have to watch china win three or four worldcups. But translation and writing quality are bad. After a while it became unreadable.

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    Renol_devin2 months ago
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    Renol_devin2 months ago
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  • Renol_devin
    Renol_devin2 months ago
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    what kind of trash skill is this? imagine if he became a starter. Then isn't he useless after first ten minutes? Also football is not all about shots and dribble If the system can actually improve his basic skills to a good degree that would have been an excellent starter pack.

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  • Renol_devin
    Renol_devin2 months ago
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    translation is just so-so. just slightly better than mtl.

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