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thanks , Appreciate it bro
Well , A solid starting ground , for a prologue . The kind that keeps the reader craving for more , it keeps those strides of mystery mingling. I've taken a liking into it , Keep for more , just you need to separate paragraphs into smaller ones , because it seems as if reading an article not a novel , Just for some professionalism . keep it up
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
at the current point No romance , No Harem but the mc will fuck any woman that draw his intention as for the future , I myself I dunno
Naaaaah ,He won't
Naaah , He is The MC lol just kidding he would be smashed
a woman indeed
Very well; I won’t engage in debate any further. There will always be nuances and inevitable conflicts between perspectives, and I don’t intend for my novel to cater to everyone’s taste—that’s precisely the foundation on which it’s built. It’s a work that may end up unsettling as many people as it engages, and I’m not here to seek universal approval. If novels of this kind genuinely resonated with you, I doubt you’d respond in this way, particularly with such emphasis on 'ingratitude.' As for Fang, in my view, he’s a fundamentally good person. That’s my personal interpretation, and it doesn’t require validation. Must we align entirely in our viewpoints for you to feel satisfied? It does make me wonder how you might have reacted to the novel I ultimately decided to delete; I imagine your response would have been even more intense As for my writing style and vocabulary, I intend to keep it straightforward. In my previous novel, I leaned into a more descriptive approach, but readers actually criticized it, suggesting it seemed 'AI-generated' because of its style. This time, I’m focusing on simplicity and clarity to avoid that kind of misinterpretation.
I can see , Fang is a villain? How so? my MC is more than a Trash , He is True to himself , Ungrateful ? He didn't ask to be born in this world . the thing is , After 10 years of throughout reading it seems that you know nothing about Villains , not a broken one , a true one from his core Read the story , and cut the nonsense , You'll see things Far more than 10 years can Handle .