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  • GamersUnite_7321
    GamersUnite_73213 years ago
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    GamersUnite_73213 years ago
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    Writing quality is passable but the story development is fucking terrible. He bootlicks and follows Tang San and he also accepted being an apprentice of the trash grandmaster. I mean why? the only fucking he made the theories about soul rings and other shit is because of spirit hall and Bibi dong lmao, also don't forget he won't be able to conduct them without protection was because he was trash. The character design was dumb as ****. The MC is a total retard who didn't join the spirit hall because he's scared. He fucking had plans which requires not only manpower but also money which he doesn't have since he does not have a single organization backing him up. Also don't forget the fact that he may be able to make money but he'd be also be targeted constantly without any backing.

  • GamersUnite_7321
    GamersUnite_73213 years ago
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    Writing quality is passable but the story development is fucking terrible. He bootlicks and follows Tang San and he also accepted being an apprentice of the trash grandmaster. I mean why? the only fucking he made the theories about soul rings and other shit is because of spirit hall and Bibi dong lmao, also don't forget he won't be able to conduct them without protection was because he was trash. The character design was dumb as ****. The MC is a total retard who didn't join the spirit hall because he's scared. He fucking had plans which requires not only manpower but also money which he doesn't have since he does not have a single organization backing him up. Also don't forget the fact that he may be able to make money but he'd be also be targeted constantly without any backing. 6mth

  • GamersUnite_7321
    GamersUnite_73213 years ago
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    ut the story development is fucking terrible. He bootlicks and follows Tang San and he also accepted being an apprentice of the trash grandmaster. I mean why? the only fucking he made the theories about soul rings and other shit is because of spirit hall and Bibi dong lmao, also don't forget he won't be able to conduct them without protection was because he was trash. The character design was dumb as ****. The MC is a total retard who didn't join the spirit hall because he's scared. He fucking had plans which requires not only manpower but also money which he doesn't have since he does not have a single organization backing him up. Also don't forget the fact that he may be able to make money but he'd be also be targeted constantly without any backing. 6mth

  • GamersUnite_7321
    GamersUnite_73213 years ago
    回復 GamersUnite_7321

    Writing quality is passable but the story development is fucking terrible. He bootlicks and follows Tang San and he also accepted being an apprentice of the trash grandmaster. I mean why? the only fucking he made the theories about soul rings and other shit is because of spirit hall and Bibi dong lmao, also don't forget he won't be able to conduct them without protection was because he was trash. The character design was dumb as ****. The MC is a total retard who didn't join the spirit hall because he's scared. He fucking had plans which requires not only manpower but also money which he doesn't have since he does not have a single organization backing him up. Also don't forget the fact that he may be able to make money but he'd be also be targeted constantly without any backing.

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    GamersUnite_73213 years ago
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    GamersUnite_73213 years ago
    回復 Demon_slayer_1336

    Yucky boo

  • GamersUnite_7321
    GamersUnite_73213 years ago
    回復 ArchDevilThearch

    I suggest Peerless Twin Spears of Doulou dalu, much better, It has perfect grammer etc. I suggest Peerless Twin Spears of Doulou dalu, much better, It has perfect grammer etc.