Brass_Badger

My pleasure! Always thankful for your support and your comments, I'm glad you're enjoying so far

My pleasure! I'm very thankful for your support these past few days and I'll definitely be posting new chapters soon

I'm normally not a romance person but the chemistry between Femmia and Cato is just amazing. There's awesome chemistry here and I have a feeling that things are going to get wild. The writing overall is excellent and I think this is gonna be a great story (assuming the author keeps up with updates). Awesome work and looking forward to more!!

Someone got CAUGHT ahahaha

Potential for a strong emotional beat--could be further developed for even greater impact

Age is registered down to the minute? I find that rather disturbing for some reason...great work!

This is looking to be a very interesting world! Some writing tips: before you start working on your story, write for ten minutes a day without stopping--don't stop even to edit mistakes. It won't be great writing, but that's OK. When you're finished with ten minutes, read through and pick your favorite sentence and use that to start a new story. Do this every day and you'll be a much faster writer before you know it.

Very nice way of establishing time! Also gaming pods as being better for posture was an interesting surprise. There's great world building here

A very sweet story about a lonely siren that gains the power to change her tail into legs (and back again) through the power of a magic pearl. Through the Pearl the sire has a chance to go between the human and aquatic worlds, with lots of great potential for tension as a anyone able to go between two worlds will inevitably feel pressures from both. Starting off to be a great fantasy romance!

A great paranormal mystery story from a burgeoning writer! While the writer is new to fiction, there's some great lines of dialogue and some well-built characters. This is definitely a story to look out for!