sheepenthusiast

I’m in love with your book, I can tell it’s not written by ai, one of my favourite things about how the book is written is the writing style, I’ve read up to chapter 90 and all I can say is I’d rather a clear love interest and that I feel Frey isn’t getting stronger fast enough

Also I don’t think ushering ai is a bad thing as long as the story is good and u edit it after

I think this is a good book, I like the blood knights shit and Rena op level up ability or whatever I think it’s pretty cool, you don’t get one scene with Lilith until like ch 18 and it’s not even the real her, it’s her in a trial, like brother it’s the whole premise. Also i have a strong inkling this is at least AI edited because, it’s not that certain phrases come up a lot, but when introspective dialogue about how a nighamisnt afraid anymore or is ready for what’s next. It’s just a bit annoying and the book would’ve got a 4 star if not for the sprinkling of slightly annoying corny monologue and dialogue when it doesn’t need to be emotional. I know how it is, I’ve written thousands f words worth of fiction using ai, I can tell after like 4 chapters if something is ai written unless heavely edited by a human after. Other than that great story.

if you wanna read a good book go read The Last banner, It gets about 2 chapters per day and its a reincarnation conquering story, its really good trust

if you wanna read a good book go read The Last banner, It gets about 2 chapters per day and its a reincarnation conquering story, its really good trust

if you wanna read a good book go read The Last banner, It gets about 2 chapters per day and its a reincarnation conquering story, its really good trust [also this book is awful]

if you wanna read a good book go read The Last banner, It gets about 2 chapters per day and its a reincarnation conquering story, its really good trust

dam, these grammar mistakes came after running this threw chatgpt. Please ignore for now

world war one typo

I'm the author so obviously I'm going to give this a good review but please give it a try and a review since this is my first book i would love some feedback